The Lion King- Rewritten: Zell and Simba
This story starts at the beggining where I changed everything. The beggining
may seem unoriginal (part of disney)
because Simba and Zell share the same past so expect the whole thing to
change as we go deeper into the story.
This time Simba has a brother who helps him through life until their time
comes (or maybe if I get a little urge of writing more).
Give a comment at jedpaolo04@hotmail.com suggestions are welcome.
Want to use one of my made up characters? Feel free to use them. Just make
sure you use them well in your story.
A change of the beggining- Lion King
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Original Characters (by appearance) :-
Mufasa
Sarabi
Zazu
Rafiki
Scar
Simba
Nala
Serafina
Shenzie
Bonzai
Ed
Timon
Pumbaa
Kiara
Kovu
Zira
Vitani
Nuka
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Made up Characters (by me) (I think all of these names are too modern don't
you think? So if you don't like them
just make up your own name and replace it. by the way feel free to use these
names in your stories,
after you read this whole story/script thing, tell me about it also, how it
was if you want to [ jedpaolo04@hotmail.com ].
I don't get that much mail you know so I might mail you back with a pretty
long one, I love writing/typing/making stories):-
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(random order)
Zell (Brother of Simba) (not really an african name but I can't think of any
so ... whatever)
Adel (Female leopard)
Shogan (leopard)
Horde (leopard)
Marina (Female leopard)
Hade (leopard's Ruler or leopard King)
Selfie (Lioness)
Ana (Lioness [make up another african name if this is too modern/common])
Horacius (Zell's Rival)
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Chapter 1:Circle of Life
(Ok you all know the beggining of it. Rafiki grabs the sand of Pride rock
symbolizing
that Simba is the heir to the throne. This time Imagine the there was
another cub
resting on Sarabi's arms. I'll just skip to the part where Simba gets up
early in the morning so that Mufasa could show him the Kingdom.
Remeber I WILL ONLY FOLLOW THE LIFE OF ZELL, since we already know a lot
about Simba I'll just go to him on important occasions.
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~*two weeks after their birth*~
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Simba gets up an looks around. He breaks free from his mothers arms waking
Zell up by his hasty movement.
Zell: [sleepily] Uhhh, up already.
Simba: Yeah, today's the day dad will show me the kingdom.
Zell: That's nice... Guess I'll have to play with Nala until you're
finished. How long will it take you anyway?
Simba walks out of the cave followed by Zell going to the tip of Pride rock
watching the Rising sun.
Simba: I dunno probably until noon.
Zell: Guess you have to wake dad up now if it's going to take that long.
Simba: I'll just do that.
Simba walks back into the cave. Zell, still watching the sunrise turned back
and went back into the cave.
As Zell walks in he see's Simba Nudging Mufasa.
Simba: Dad, Dad, Dad, Dad, Dad, Dad. [Simba continues while Serabi whispers
to Mufasa.]
Sarabi: Your son is awake.
Mufasa: Before sunrise he's your sun
Simba:Dad, Dad, Dad, DAD! [tackles his Mufasa] You promised! [looks sternly]
Mufasa: Ok, Ok. I'm up, I'm up.
Zell shrugs as he walks to Simba and Mufasa who is about to leave pride
rock.
Zell: See you later Simba, See ya dad.
Mufasa: Do you wanna come with us?
Zell: Nah, maybe next time. I don't wanna cram stuff into my head just yet.
Simba laugh's
Simba: Later Zell.
Mufasa: I'll talk to you later son.
The sun was up high in the sky, it has only been a while since Mufasa and
Simba left.
Zell walks to Nala's mother-Serafina.
Zell: Excuse me, is Nala around here?
Nala: I'm here.
Nala walked out from behind her mother.
Serafina: Now you two play safely okay? Don't go too far now.
Nala: Yes mom.
Sarabi walks into view.
Sarabi: Get going now you two. But don't go outside the area of Pride Rock
okay?
Zell: Yes mom. So can we go now? If you don't have any other warnings to
tell us.
The lioness's chuckle.
Serafina: Sure
Sarabi: Go ahead.
Zell and Nala running down Pride Rock.
Zell: About time they let us go. Sheesh.
Nala: Yeah, so... what do you wanna do?
Zell: Let's play tag until Simba arrives. He should'nt take long now. It's
almost noon.
Nala: Sure, let's see.
Nala pounced on Zell pinning him down.
Nala: You're it.
Zell: Guess again
Zell smiled and pushed a Nala from her stomach making Nala roll vertically,
switching places with Zell.
Zell: You're...it
The two cubs played until Simba came back with Zazu.
Nala: Hey, Simba
Simba: Hello Nala, Zell
Zell: Hi... where's dad?
Zazu: He went off chasing after some Hyena's in the pride lands...
[shudders] nasty creature's [fly's off]
Simba: Yeah, Dad showed me the whole Kingdom.
Zell: You make me feel that I missed out a lot.
Simba: [arrogantly] Oh, yeah.
Serafina [calling out in the distance]: Nala! Time for your bath!
Nala: Oh, Rats! Oh well... better go.
Zell: See ya Nala
Simba: Bye
Nala leave's
Zell: So what are we gonna do now?
Simba: I dunno. Maybe I'll go to Uncle Scar and tell him that I'm gonna rule
the kingdom. Maybe he does'nt know.
Zell: You do that. Sounds like a brag job...Anyway just tell himjust for
info. I'm gonna lie around, doing nothing.
Simba chuckle's
Simba: See you later.
A few minute's later.
Simba walk's in
Simba: Zell! Zell! C'mon, Uncle Scar told me about this cool place.
Zell: Where?
Simba: I'll tell it to you with Nala. Let's go find her.
Zell: I bet she's still taking a bath, anyway. Race you there!
Zell runs off.
Simba laughing.
Simba: No fair.
Zell and Simba reached Nala being licked by her mother.
Simba: Hey Nala
Nala: Hey Simba. Hey Zell
Simba: [Whispering] C'mon I've just heard abiut this really cool place.
Nala: Simba! I'm kind of in a middle of a bath in here.
Sarabi: And it's time for your's
Simba: Mom! Mom! You're messing up my mane
Sarabi smiles
Sarabi: Don't think I will forget you Zell.
Zell: Uhhh, I already jumped into the water hole a few minute's ago.
Sarabi smiled not convinced
Simba: Not fair! [Sarabi continues licking, Simba gets annoyed] Ok Ok I'm
clean can can I go now?
Sarabi: And where is this 'really cool' place
Simba: Uhhh, the water hole.
Nala: The water hole? What's so great about the water hole?
Simba: [whispering even softer] I'll show you when we get there.
Nala: Oh... Mom can I go with Simba and Zell?
Serafina: I don't know Sarabi, what do you think?
Sarabi: Hmmm, It's okay with me.
Zell, Nala and Simba: YEAH [all running off to the distance]
Sarabi: As long as Zazu goes with you!
Simba: Not Zazu.
Sarabi: I'll fetch him for you. [ leave's]
Mufasa enter's.
Mufasa: Zell, I want to talk with you.
Zell looks at Simba
Zell: [sighs] guess I better go. [whisper's] tell me where you are going so
I may meet you there.
Simba: [Whisper's] An elephant graveyard in the outlands
Zell: [hold's back his 'WOW'] Ok. See you there.
Simba and Nala leave's with Zazu.
Zell: Yes dad?
Mufasa: being the eldest brother I should have picked you to be the heir of
the throne.
Zell: Huh?
Mufasa: I chose Simba at least a couple of minute's after you were born as
the heir because I thought he would need an older
and wiser lion to guide him.
Zell: Wow... now I'm wise... cool [long pause] I still don't get it.
Mufasa: [laugh]. Zell, you catch up with language so quickly, you should be
careful- too much sarcasm.
I want you to protect Simba. Keep him out of danger. Be his guide or make
sure he does the right thing.
Zell: I'd be glad to.
Mufasa: Thank you. Now I think you Simba and Nala were supposed to be going
somewhere. Why don't you catch up?
Zell: Thank's dad. [runs off]
Zell runs off out of site of his father quickly reaching the borders of the
outlands and the Pride lands.
Zell heard Simba's voice in the distance and ran to see Simba and a troupe
of animals.
Simba: Oh, I just can't wait to be King
{Animals go off balance}
Simba: Oh, I just can't wait! To be KING!
{Animals collapse}
Zell watches.
Zell: [disbelievingly] I've seen it but I still don't believe it.
Simba and Nala walked to Zell from the animals.
The animals broke free and left a rhino in the middle.
Zell: Where's Zazu.
Nala: Take a guess [looking at the rhino]
Simba: I...am a genius
Nala: Hey genius it was my idea!
Simba: Oh Yeah?
Simba pounced on Nala. Nala pinned Simba.
Zell: The trick is to kick her with you hind legs. Push yourself forward
with your hind legs.
Simba tried to kicked her and suceeded but that kick made the fall down a
dark slope into the outlands.
Simba & Nala: Whoa!
Zell: SIMBA!
Zell jumped down the slope
Simba: I'm okay
Nala: Me too
Zell: Great! But Dad told me that I should keep you out of danger and that
guardian stuff. So I can't make you stay here.
Simba: Awww man! Another miniature Zazu
Zell: [thinking] But any way let's go. [laughs] I'm not like Zazu. But we'll
stay here for a while.
Nala: Then what are we waiting for? Let's go
Simba: Yeah!
Zell: For five minutes only! [laughing while running along with them]
Simba stopped followed by Zell and Nala.
They were looking straight at a skull of an elephant conjoined with it's
tusk's.
Simba: Woah! Cool!
Nala: Neat. We could get in big trouble.
Zell: Whatever. Hurry up! As long as I'm with you I will get blamed for
letting you in here. I don't want to be a stiff but Dad will
be angry and I would probably lose his trust.
Nala: [ignoring Zell] I wonder if it's brains are still in there.
Simba: There's only one way to find out. C'mon let's check it out.
Zell: Has anyone been listening to me!?
Zazu: HALT! The only checking out you will do is to check out of here. Were
way beyond the boundaries of the pride lands.
Zell: Ughh. Busted. Man Dad's gonna kill me.
Simba: Heh Heh. Look's like banana beak is scared.
Zazu: That's Mr. Banana beak to you fuzzy! Right now we are in very grave
danger.
Simba: Danger! hah. [walks to the mouth of the skull] I laugh at the face of
danger [deep laugh]
(Hyena's hysterical laughing)
Simba: [gasp] [runs behind Zazu]
Hyena's emerge.
Shenzie: Well, well, well Bonzai, what do we have here?
Bonzai: I don't know Shenzie, what do you think Ed?
Ed: [hysterical laughing]
Bonzai: Yeah, just what I was thinking.
Shenzie: Hey, I know you [nudging Zazu] You're Mufasa's little stooge.
Zazu: I madam, am the King's Major domo.
Shenzie: And that would make you [looking at Simba] --
Simba: Future King.
Shenzie: Do you know what we do to king's who step out of their kingdom?
Simba: Puh! You can't do anything to me!
Zazu: Technically, they can. We are on their lands.
Simba: But Zazu. You told me they were nothing but stupid, annoying, mangy
vultures
Zazu: [worried laughter] [whispering] on 'oopids day on 'oopids day.
Bonzai: Hey! who you calling oopids day?
Zazu: My, my, my, look at the sun. It's time to go. [pushing Nala, Simba and
Zell out]
Shenzie: What's the hurry? We'd love you to stick for dinner.
Bonzai: Yeah, we could have whatever is, Lying around [laughter]
{While saying this}
Zell: [whispering to Simba] You go. I'll distract them.
Simba nodded and gestured to Zazu who got the idea.
Shenzie: Hey I got one I got one! Make mine a cub sandwich! What d'ya think?
[hysterical laghter]
Zell: Hey! You!
Shenzie: What?
Zell: How about Fast food?
Shenzie: What about it?
Zell: well look over there.
Zell points to a random direction.
Shenzie, Bonzai and Ed looked to the direction Zell was pointing.
Shenzie: Well there's nothing there but a--- Hey! Where'd they go!?
Bonzai: Over there. [pointing to Zell climbing over a bone hill] Get 'em!
Zell was running, catching up with Nala and Simba.
Nala: We lost them!
Simba: Where's Zazu?
Zell: C'mon let's go. The hyena's may still be prowling around.
[hyena's emerge from a rock behind them]
Bonzai: You mean "They may be following us, however we run"
Shenzie: You got it! Whatever let's just eat 'em
Zell: This is the part where we run away
Simba, Nala and Zell runs to a fork.
Simba: Which way?
Zell: I hate these things
Nala: I don't wanna wait and find out!
Zell: Simba you choose!
Simba: how about we split up? There's more of a chance to get help if we
split.
Zell: [looking behind panicking] Yeah except you forgot a little tiny thing.
A fork has only two directions!!!
There's no third route!!! Unless one goes back which means death.
Nala: Fine! You take the left and Simba and I will go right.
Zell: Not a good idea but we have no time. Let's go. I'll see you somewhere!
Zell gets separated from Simba and Nala.
Zell: [looking back while running] Oh no!
All three hyena's were chasing after him
Zell: [thought] At least Simba and Nala are safe. [sighs] why do I put up
with this?
Zell: [looking forward again] Ahhhh!
Zell reached a dead end.
Shenzie: Well, well, well. Looks like you've reached a DEAD END.
Bonzai: You know, every dead end there should be a sign saying "you're life
ends here"
Shenzie and Ed: [hysterical laughing]
Zell: Drop dead! And did you know your jokes are way too lame. Get a life!
Bonzai: [growls] Why You little twerp! What'cha doin insultin my pride?
Shenzie: Ohhhh! Such a young age and a crude mass of words. You sure know
how to use them.
Too bad those words were your last one.
Zell: [ looking around for an escape route] [noticed a pile of pebbles]
Bonzai: Give it up 'what's your name' No escape now!
Zell: Look! It's my dad!
Shenzie, Ed and Bonzai: Huh? [looking distractedly]
Zell picked up a few pebbles between his fingertips*
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For an example on what he's done. To those who have seen Lion King 1 1/2
refer to the snail eating contest
where Simba eats four snails at once.
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Zell tossed the pebbles straight at the hyena's hitting them straight on
their head.
Zell: [awed] Wow! didn't know I could throw it direct hit!
The hyena's were blinded by the dust caried by the stones.
Shenzie: You're so dead [regaining eyesight]
Zell: Look! Dad!
Bonzai: Oh no we're not falling for that again [also regaining eyesight]
Zell: Aww... too bad. Gee. If you looked behind you, you would still be
alive.
Shenzie and Bonzai: Huh?
Mufasa's roar behind them, statling all three hyena's.
Mufasa fought the hyena's pinning all three down to the ground.
Shenzie: We're really sorry
Bonzai: Yeah!
Mufasa: SILENCE {conjoined roar}
Bonzai: [weakly] yeah we'll shut up right now.
Mufasa: If you ever go near my son's again--
Shenzie: These were you're sons. Oh, we did'nt know that no!
Bonzai: Yeah, no.
Bonzai and Shenzie: Yeah... Ed?
Ed: [nodding]
Mufasa: [roar]
Bonzai: heh heh, toodle's
Hyena's exit whimpering.
Simba emerges behind his father accompanied by Nala and Zazu.
Zell joins Simba
Simba: Dad I--
Mufasa: You deliberately disobeyed me!
Simba: Dad I-- I'm sorry.
Mufasa: Let's go home!
Mufasa: Zazu!
Zazu: Yes, sire?
Mufasa: Take Nala home. I have to teach my son's a lesson.
Zazu fly's to Simba.
Simba: Dad, Zell had nothing to do with this! It was my fault, he was trying
to stop us but I just forced him to come with me,
and since he cannot leave me alone he had to come with me.
Mufasa: [noticing Simba's urge to let Zell out of this] Very well. Zell, go
with Nala and Zazu.
Zazu (to Simba): Simba good luck.
Zell: thank you.
Nala: I thought you were very brave.
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Zazu brings Nala and Zell home where they are put to bed, shortly after
Simba's and Mufasa's arrival.
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~*The next day*~
Zell: *yawn*
Simba: So, you're finally up. Uncle Scar told us to meet him at the water
hole.
Simba was up in front of Zell. His mother had gotten up before him and Zell
lay there alone in the cave
Zell: huh? why? By the way did I sleep that long?
Simba: Uh-huh.
Zell: So what does Uncle want?
Simba: beats me... he said he was taking us to the gorge.
Zell: Ok. Is he there now?
Simba: Zell, he practically asked me to wake you up!
Zell: well then, better get going.
The two cubs walked together reaching the water hole where Scar waited.
Scar: So? My favourite nephew is finally up?
Zell: Yeah right, uhhh, I'm not into favouritism but hey, I'll go along with
it.
Scar: *chuckles* Ok fine. [looking at Simba] Well done Simba. You truly are
my favourite nephew.
Since your brother is not into 'favor'
Zell: Works with me!
Scar: So, let's get going shall we.
The three lions walked to the gorge where Scar asked the cubs to sit and
wait under a tree in the gorge.
Scar: You two wait here. Your father has a surprise for you two.
Simba: Whoa. What is it?
Zell: Yeah.
Scar: No, no, no. You really are naughty boy's.
Simba: If you tell us, we'll still ask surprised.
Zell: [nod's in agreement]
Scar: I won't tell you. Well I'd better get your Dad and his surprise.
Simba: Hey Uncle Scar?
Scar: Hmm?
Simba: Will we like this surprise?
Scar: Simba it's to die for.
~(note to reader: Scar was supposed to tell Simba about his roar but since
the hyena's didn't follow him.)~
Zell: I wonder what it is.
Simba: I don't know
Zell: Funny... Was there a question there?
Simba: Just for information.
Zell: [rolls his eyes] yeah right.
Simba: Think Fast! [pounces while saying this]
Zell: Huh? [looking at Simba] Oof!
Simba: Too late! [pinning Zell to the ground]
Zell: Don't you ever learn? [pushed his hind legs kicking Simba off him
making Zell ontop of Simba]
Simba: Oof!
Zell: You gotta listen to me more often. [gets off Simba]
Simba: [gets up] Hey whats that sound?
{ground shakes}
Zell: What's happening!
Simba: I- I don't know
Zell: [looks around] Look! [noticing the stampede]
Simba: STAMPEDE!!!
Zell: Run for it!!!
Simba: Way ahead of you! [running ahead of Zell]
Zell: [Runs along side Simba]
Simba and Zell were running but they were not fast enough getting caught up
in the stampede.
Zell: [stops] [looks around cautiously avoiding the hooves] Simba? [looking
around] SIMBA?
Simba: [hanging on a withered tree] Zell! GO I'm fine... I think. Just go
find a safe place to get away!
Zell: [now yelling] Thats not a safe place. Just hang on there! Don't let
go!
Simba: I will [yelling back] Shouting there in one place IS A BAD IDEA!!!
Zell: [turns his back on Simba's tree] Ok! See you!
Zell ran to the side walls of the gorge and notices a small crease.
Zell: [thought] If I could squeeze in there.
Zell claws on the crease making it wider.
He slipped inside watching the raging stampede.
He had a good sight of Simba which was not far from the crease. Simba was
now dangling from the tree.
Zell turned away from the view back to the stamped in front of him and
notices a hyena.
Zell: huh? [thinks for a while] It must be my imagination.
Zell turned back to watching Simba.
Simba: Zazu HELP ME!
Zazu was flying beside him.
Zazu: Don't worry Simba your father is on the way. Where's Zell?
Zell: I'm here!! [shouting as loud as he can]
Zazu: [hears him and goes inside the crease with him]
Zell: Tell Dad to save Simba first. I am safe here. He can wait until the
stampede finishes.
Zazu: Yes, of course. [fly's out]
Zell: [looks back at Simba] Oh No!
The tree broke making Simba fly into the air.
Simba: Aaaah!
Mufasa: [jumps out catching Simba in his mouth]
Zell: Dad...
Zell hears a growl.
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Mufasa drops Simba on a ledge and gets caught in the stampede
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Zell could'nt see his Dad and Simba.
Mufasa: Aaaaaaahhh!
Simba: Noooooooo!
Zell: [hearing them] Dad!?
Stampede finishes
Zell: [walks out of the crease] Dad?
Simba: Dad? [meets up with Zell]
Zell: What happened? I heard Dad shouting.
Simba: H-h-he fell off the cliff [holding back his tears]
Zell: [sadly almost crying] let's go find him.
Simba: [looks at the withered tree where he hanged] Dad?
dust clears up
Simba: DAD!
Zell: where?
Simba: [runs under the withered tree] [weakly] Daad!
Zell: [stops as he see's Mufasa's corpse] Dad... [turns away from the sight]
[cry]
Simba: [also in tears] Dad... C'mon wake up... It's time to go.
Simba: Somebody! [pause] Anybody... [pause] [weakly] help.
Zell: .....................
Scar appears
Scar: Simba... Zell. What have you done.
Zell: W-w-we didn't do anything
Simba: *sobs* I-i-it was an accident... we didn't mean for it to happen.
Scar: [you know the tone of this] Of course, Of course... [normal tone] No
one ever means for these thing to happen now embracing Simba.
Simba: W-w-w-what sh-sh-shall we do? *sob*
Scar: Run away! Both of you run away!
Simba and Zell: [looks up at Scar]
Scar: Imagine what would everyone would say. If it was'nt for you two Mufasa
would still be alive.
Simba: [backs off]
Zell: *sob*
Scar: Go! And never return!
Zell and Simba: [runs off in the same direction]
Zell and Simba reaches a blocked path.
They hear hyena's on their tail. {not their tail but they're being followed}
Zell: We've got to climb up!
Simba was already climbing up.
Zell looked back and saw the hyena's.
Zell: Simba! You go ahead! They have'nt seen you! They have seen me so they
are bound to follow me.
Simba: No! We must stay together!
Zell: [harshly this time] No! Go quick!
Simba: [sobs and goes out of sight]
Noticing a small cave he goes in and see's a small dim light.
Following it he reaches an opening and squeezed out into the wilderness.
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For an example It's like the hole Kiara came out after she was so upset with
her father after exiling Kovu
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Zell running in tears looked one more time at the lands he used to call
home. He was thinking if he was ever going to see his lands again. Giving up
the idea of going back. He headed north-east. Into a wild savannah.
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Simba went north
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Zell: [thought] It has been three days since I left... No food... No water.
[looks up to the sky] I hope Simba is doing well
I am sorry father... [faints]
*********** ******** *********
[splash]
Zell: [thought] what's this?
[splash]
Zell: Am I.... alive
Unknown voice #1: Hey wake up
Zell: [softly] ugghh
Unknown voice #1: MOM! MOM! He's waking up!
Unknown voice #2: Oh good
Zell: [opens eyes] where.... where am I? [focusing in the brightness]
Zell saw one young cheetah and her mother.
Young leopard: Hi, you're in the lands of the leopards. My names Marina.
Adult leopard: I'm Adel nice to meet you. You almost died.
Marina: Where do you come from? What are you doing alone? Are you a lion?
Can you---
Adel: Marina! He has just gained conciousness. Don't ask too many questions.
We can talk after we give him some food and water. And Marina, clearly he is
a lion.
Marina: [frowning] Hmph!
Adel: C'mon... whats your name kid?
Zell: I'm Zell [looking around the lands]
Zell noticed that the Leopard's lands were much more peaceful, although
there was'nt a lot of resources.
There was a lot of green leaves and trees. It was a beautiful place.
Zell: [Weakly] Is this some kind of kingdom? There's a King in here too
right?
Adel: Well... yes.
Marina: The names of thes lands are pretty stupid. I mean leap lands?
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A group af cheetah's = a leap of leopards
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Marina: I prefer the Pride lands... I mean teh lions get to have a cool
group name... [looking at Zell] No offense! [chuckle]
Adel: Yeah... wev'e been trying to compete aainst the Pride lands because of
their rich resources and inhabitants. Bu were ally's all the way. If they
ever contact us...
Marina: Saayy... You're not frome the Pride lands are you?
Zell: [surprised] me! oh, oh ummm no.
Adel: [smiles] I guess we'd better bring you to the King. His name is Horde,
a very great leopard.
Marina: Did I forget to tell you that I'm the princess?
Adel: [laughs] And I'm her mother.
Marina: Well... come on Zell. [giggles] Time for you to meet dad.
Zell: [grunts as she said dad] o-ok. [walks alongside Marina with the same
height as him] [Thought] They said that they were'nt in contact with the
Pride lands. I can stay here. As long as they don't know about me.
Adel: Zell? are you okay. You look awful.
Zell: Huh? Oh, I'm okay. Just thinking.
Marina: About what?
Adel: Marina! Manners.
Marina: sorry.
walking to a place very similar to pride rock. Zell saw a a whole group of
leopards lying around in front of a cave which was part of a mid mountain.
Zell noticed eyes watching him. making him feel uncomfortable.
He walked into a cave with another opening in the end. It was a pathway
going up. The path was very wide which could fit 6 lions. Zell, Marina and
Adel walked on the ascending path which was spiraling to the top of the
mountain.
The mountain was only mid-sized so it didn't take long to reach the top
where a leopard- the king sat viewing the whole kingdom.
Horde: Yes, Adel? [noticing Zell] Who Are you!
Adel: Relax, dear, he's lost, alone and hungry.
Zell: [bowing] your majesty, I humbly ask for your permission to stay in
your watch for the mean time. I am only young and couldn't do much trouble
[Horde chuckles, Adel smiles]. I may not stay here long because I may have
to leave somwhere, after all I couldn't stay here long. I can help or do as
much as I can for your leap if you let me stay. Please. [thought] Hmmm. I
guess language really is useful. Dad was right, I guess I do have language
advancement. I'd better not be sarcastic from now.
Horde: [chuckle] Well... I'm impressed. You can really talk. Say no more I
accept you as my own kind. You won't have to do any work in your stay. I
guess a young lion cub might want to learn how to hunt. You seem too young.
I want to ask you some more questions. But first Let's give you something to
eat.
Zell: Well I get that a lot [thought] ughh not sarcasm. [speaking] Thank you
for the offer of the hunt's I will gladly tak them.
Horde: So shall we get you some food.
Zell: You be-- I mean, thank you.
~To be continued~