The Lion King-rewritten: Return of the King This time Simba has a brother who helps him through life until their time comes (or maybe if I get a little urge of writing more). Give a comment at jedpaolo04@hotmail.com suggestions are welcome. Want to use one of my made up characters? Feel free to use them. Just make sure you use them well in your story. A change of the beggining- Lion King ~~~~~~ Original Characters (by appearance) :- Mufasa Sarabi Zazu Rafiki Scar Simba Nala Serafina Shenzie Bonzai Ed Timon Pumbaa Kiara Kovu Zira Vitani Nuka ~~~~~~ Made up Characters (by me) (I think all of these names are too modern don't you think? So if you don't like them just make up your own name and replace it. by the way feel free to use these names in your stories, after you read this whole story/script thing, tell me about it also, how it was if you want to [ jedpaolo04@hotmail.com ]. I don't get that much mail you know so I might mail you back with a pretty long one, I love writing/typing/making stories):- ~~~~~~ (random order) Zell (Brother of Simba) (not really an african name but I can't think of any so ... whatever) Adel (Female leopard) Shogan (leopard) Thoraciu/Thor (leopard) Marina (Female leopard) Horde (leopard's Ruler or leopard King) Selfie (Lioness) Ana (Lioness [make up another african name if this is too modern/common]) Drego (Zell's Rival) New add-ups: Kelfer Hean } lions Gund Sira Tena } Selena } Lioness's Klanti ~~~~~~ What happened so far: + Zell get's adopted by a Pride of outcast's + Zell fight's a duel + Falls in love with Ana + Leave's the Pride in search of Simba + Found Simba and Nala + Fought with Simba + Scolded Timon + Asked for back-up from Ana's Pride + Onwards to battle! Chapter 4: Confrontation Running across a desert Pumbaa, Nala and Zell reaches the Pride Lands, passing through the Leap lands along the way. Finally catching up with Simba, they see him standing on a rock, staring into the crippled lands. Zell: Simba? Simba: [looks back] Nala: What made you come back? Simba: I finally got some sense knocked into me, and I got a bump to prove it. [looking at Zell] Thank you Zell. [noticing Pumbaa] Pumbaa! What are you doing here? Pumbaa: At your service my liege! [bows] Simba: Where's Timon? [sadly noticing instantly why] Timon: [entering unexpectedly] Over here! Simba: Timon! [smiles] Thank you! Timon: let's just say a creepy Monkey and A Lion made me feel guilty. Simba: [smiled at Zell] Timon: We're fighting? For this? Simba: Yes Timon, this is my home... And my Kingdom, if I don't fight for it who will? Nala: We will, [looking at Zell] All of us. Zell: Forever. Timon: Together Pumbaa: Until the end of it all. Timon and Pumbaa: [burst into tears] Simba: Thank You. [looking around] Where's Ana? Zell: She'll be here. Let's go infiltrate Pride rock! Timon: YEAH!! Let's GO [softening as everyone looks at him] Team?~~ Zell: Way too corny.... Timon: Hey watch it kid! Simba and Friends walk behind a fallen tree giving enough cover just to see the hyena's all oround Pride Rock. Timon: Hyena's, [sigh] I hate hyena's Zell: [thought] Hyena's!!! [thinking about their encounter everywhere] [thought] Strange, wern't those hyena's in the stampede? Those who chased us? [not thought] [loud gasp] Simba: Zell? What's wrong? Zell: I realised something! But first I need to clear some stuff. But First how do we get past the hyena's? Simba: Live bait! Everyone looks at Timon and Pumbaa. Timon: WHAT??? ~Hula Song and Dance (after that)~ Timon and Pumbaa: AAAaaaahhhh [chased away] Simba: Nala, go rally the lioness's I'll go for Scar. Zell: I will go check on something first. Be careful Simba. [on the Side of Pride Rock] ********** For an example where Zell wen't to, It's the same place where Kiara escaped Simba. The hole on the side of Pride Rock ********** Zell: [thought] There's got to be a way in the cave! Scar: [distant shout] SARABI!!! Zell: [gasp] got to find a way in quick! [noticing a loose pile of stones, Zell starts removing them and see's a small opening] Yes!! Zell Squeezed in the hole reaching the dee part of the Cave. There were Bones everywhere. Voice: Is anybody there? Zell: Zazu? Zazu: Simba? [pause] Zell? Zell: Yeah! Zazu: ZELL YOU'RE ALIVE!!! Zell: Shhhh!!! [breaking the rib cage] Zazu: [flying out] Is Simba-- Zell: Yes! I need to know something. At the day of stampede, can you tell me Dad's schedule? Did he have a plan for me and Simba in the gorge? Zazu: Why no! In fact Scar was the one who pointed out the stampede, ant it's a good thing he did, otherwise Simba would be dead. Zell: ....... That's what he want's everyone to think [angrily + growl] Simba in distance: NO! I'm NOT A MURDERER!!! Scar in distance: Oh Simba! You're in trouble again, too bad daddy isn't here to save you! Now every one knows why! Simba falls but grasps the ledge of Pride Rock Zell: [running out of the Cave] STOP!!! SCAR YOU MURDEROUS TREACHEROUS LITTLE INSOLENT SNAKE!!! Scar: Zell!? Zell: [feeling rage] [uses the back of his paw to hit Scar on his muzzle, sending Scar all the way down to the mouth of the cave] Zell pulling Simba up from the ledge. Scar: YOU!!! Zell: [shouting] listen everyone!!! Simba and I didn't kill Mufasa! Scar: Lies!!! Simba: We didn't kill him Zell: It was Scar who did it!!! Scar: Presposterous!!! Zell: Oh yeah!? [ accusingly] Let's see where do I begin? One day Simba, Me and Nala went to the Elephant Grave yard. SUDDENLY THREE HYENA'S WERE ABOUT TO KILL US!!! Ok, let's see, The stampede while in the crease I saw a glimpse of a hyena, I THINK THEY CAUSED IT DON'T YOU AGREE SCAR? Scar: [looking at the lioness's] I didn't know. Zell: AND THEN YOU TOLD ME AND SIMBA TO RUN AWAY!!! ISN'T THAT RIGHT? [mockingly] Uncle? Scar: No I didn't Simba: LIAR!!! Zell: LET'S SEE, WHY DID HYENA'S CHASE US OUT OF PRIDE LANDS RIGHT AFTER TELLING US TO RUN? IT'S LIKE THEY WERE ON A MISSION TO KILL US! Scar: [angry] THIS DOES'NT HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH ME!!! Zell: [ignoring, angry, shouting, rage building up] THEN HYENA'S APPEAR IN PRIDE ROCK!!! WHY? Scar: ....... Simba: YOU [glaring angrily at Scar with a roar] For SIX YEARS I HAVE BEEN AWAY FROM MY HOME BECAUSE OF YOU!!! Scar: Well, ummm........... [laugh] [looks at Zell] You think you got the better of me havn't you Zell? But let me tell you something. All quiet Zell: [Menacingly] what! Scar: Were'nt you the one who killed ANOTHER KING? Nala, Simba and Lioness's gasp. Zell: No! It wasn't me! Scar approaching Zell: Wasn't it you who murdered Horde? Ever faithful to the King Mufasa? Zell: No, but how did you--- Scar: Ask Shogan yourself? [whistle] Shogan: [Emerges from behind a rock together with Marina, Thor and A leopard.] Well, well, well... we meet again murderer. Zell: NO!!! I am not a MURDERER!!! I DID NOT KILL HORDE YOU DID!!!! Shogan: Must we all have to shout? How about asking one of your 'Friends' What they think of you. Zell: [looks at Marina] Marina? [Looks at Thor] Thor? .............No....... Scar: Well, what an.... elaborating reunion. Here's a celebration. HYENA'S ATTACK SIMBA!!!!! Nala: NO!!! Lioness's: [roar] [fight's hyena's] Simba: AAaaagghh [screaming as hyena's jump on him] Zell: [stunned] Simba........... ~*Flash back*~ + Stampede Zell: FATHER!!! Simba: NOOOOOooo!!! Mufasa: Aaaaahhhhh!!! + Shogan Shogan: {slash Horde on the throat} Zell: Nooooo!!!! Shogan: Aaahh, Zell, perfect timing ~*Back to battle*~ Shogan: Zell!!! This time I'm getting rid of you for good!!! Zell: [weakly] I will not fight you..... I did not kill anyone... Thor and Marina: [shocked at this reply] The battle raged on, Simba was chasing Scar to the top, flames were all over Pride Rock. Marina: You.... will not fight? Leopard 1: ....... Shogan: Good, this will make it easier for me to kill you! { slashes Zell on the muzzle } Zell: [roar of pain] Aaaahhh!!! [blood splattered on the floor] I... will not fight you Shogan: So be it! [back hand slap] Haa! Zell: Aaahhh [sending Zell sliding on the floor hitting a wall hard on the back] Thor: Shogan! Enough! Zell will not fight and is risking his own life for his innocence! Marina: Yes, Shogan! Stop it! Shogan: [ignoring] {slash Zell on the chest} Zell: Arrgghh [grunts] Thor: ENOUGH!!! [pounces on Shogan] There was blood every inch of Zell. Zell: [coughing blood out] You... killed Horde! Marina: Shhh, say no more Zell. Shogan: Thor! You are a traitor! Thor: No! I believe Zell's telling the truth! Zell! You go help your Pride! I'll take care of this myself! Zell: [smiling weakly] Ana: OUTCAST LIONS!!! ATTACK!!! Zell looked surprised seeing all the outcast lions charging straight at Pride rock. Ana: Zell!!! [running straight to Zell] Are you okay? You're hurt! Zell: It's okay... Ana: Drego ran away... He didn't want to help. Zell: It's okay. I have to fight! Ana: NO! You're in no condition! Stay here! [bringing Zell inside the cave limping] Zell: I can't stay here while you risk you life! Ana: It's okay I'll be alright! Ana leaves Zell: [stand up] I'm gonna fight. [running out on full force] {slashing any hyena's out of his way as he makes his way to Simba} [gasping for air due to the seering pain on his chest face and body] Simba: You don't deserve to live! Scar: Uhhh, Ummm, I-I'm family! It was the hyena's It was their fault! It was they're idea! Simba: Why should I believe you? Everything you ever told me was a lie! Scar: What are you going to do? You wouldn't kill your own uncle would you? Simba: No! I'm not like you! Scar: Oh, Thank heaven's you Simba are truly noble indeed, and how shall I approve myself to you? Simba: Run! Run away Scar and never return! Scar: [softly] Yes, right away, as you wish. Your MAJESTY [this phrase + growl] [kicks some soot to Simba's eye's] Zell: [pounces at Scar] Scar: Oh, bloodied up are you? [pushes Zell off] Zell: Simba are you okay? Simba: Yes, I'm fine.... Zell you are not suited for this battle! You are injured! Stay DOWN!!! Zell: [giving up] fine!!! But if you get hurt! Scar: Ooohhh big brother teaching small... how original. Zell: Shut up! Scar: {slashes Simba on the muzzle} *********** Okay you all know how it goes. I'll skip to the part when everyone won *********** Zell: [Walks down] Marina: [walking up to Zell] I'm sorry. Thor: [Also walking with Marina] Will you forgive us Leopard 1: Please? Zell: I owe it all to you Thor... I thank you and I have nothing to forgive... You have done nothing wrong. Marina: Thanks. Thor: Thank you [bows head] Son of Mufasa. Leopard 1: [bows] Thor: Well, you don't want to know what happened to Shogan. Zell: Don't tell me. Thor: Oh well, Let's go home Marina, [looks at leopard 1 and gestures at him] Zell: Bye... I'll visit you sometime. Ana: [walking to his side] I'm so proud of you... You are a Royal... I didn't know that... Zell: [chuckle] You do now! [nuzzle on his non-bloodied up side of his face] Simba: Zell...... let's claim the lands together... Zell: [smile] [walks beside Simba] Shall we? Simba: Let's! Simba and Zell: [walks to the tip of Pride Rock and roars followed by the other lioness's and lions.] ~*After the roaring*~ Zell: [walks up to Gund] Please, join our Pride... You may call this home. Gund: [smiles and bows] Zell: I'm not the King! [laugh] [looking at Hean] But you can pay off that bet we made. Hean: What!!! I thought you were kidding!!! Zell: I was, I was just reserving it for later. [laugh] Hean: Awww man. Simba: Zell...... We did it.... ~End of Lion King~ Hey It's not over! This is merely just the beggining of Lion King part two Kiara and Kovu!! So TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE IT!!!.... or else